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Swordbird

9/25/2016

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Reviewed by Olivia

Rating: High Four

Who I'd Recommend to: Fans of Warriors, Wings of Fire, and other similar series. 

Synopsis (from Goodreads):
The blue jays and cardinals of Stone-Run Forest have turned against each other. According to legend, only Swordbird, son of the Great Spirit, has the power to conquer evil and restore peace to the land. But is he real or just a myth? Can Swordbird arrive in time to save the forest . . . or will it be too late?

(click the Read More button in the bottom right hand corner of this post to read the full review)

Thoughts: To be completely honest, I picked this book up primarily because it was written by a twelve-year-old. I was, admittedly, curious to see how well kids my age could write - I lacked any original interest in the story. This quickly changed. I was eager to review this book because many of the reviews I've read for it seem to show a heap of bias - either written by kids who are earnestly defending literature written by kids, or by adults, who either show powerful jealousy towards Nancy Yi Fan, the author (I've seen this displayed by some kids as well), or who didn't enjoy the book simply because they were reading a book that was targeted to people well below their age. There were also a lot of people who compared it to REDWALL and said the author just "copied" REDWALL, except with birds  (I haven't read REDWALL yet).

For me, although SWORDBIRD has its many flaws, it was still a thoroughly enjoyable and worthwhile read. It's the type of book I would've fawned over for months as a nine-year-old (Oscar has yet to read it, but I'm positive he would enjoy it as well). The story, although simple, is exciting and suspenseful, reminding me of Warriors. The characters were likable, admirable, and fairly well-rounded - however, it was, at times, difficult to pick out a main character, since so many were mentioned. Turnatt was a fantastic villain, even better, I think, than the heroines. A hawk who eats babies because he believes it will make him live eternally? This was pure genius. 

The writing, on the other hand, was pretty choppy. There would often be long paragraphs of description, with hardly any dialogue at all. Yi Fan also switched perspectives pretty rapidly - from Aska to Glenagh to Flame-Beak and then to Turnatt. This often became pretty tiresome, because I didn't know where to focus. This only slightly detracted from the story, but enough so where I had to dock a star.  And again, the characters - there were just a few too many. The story was immensely simple, which is totally fine, but that means the characters have to be, too, at least in my book. Not simple as in not dimensional, but simple as in only one or two main characters with POVs, instead of ten. Thus, the story, although this seldom happened, became confusing or dull. 

Again, though, this was a solid high four. I enjoyed it to the fullest, the plot was, overall, pretty steady, the action was exciting and suspenseful, and the characters were likable. And although there were many flaws, I think I'll be revisiting this one again and recommending it to some of my younger friends. So, to answer my original question: how well could kids my age write a story? If Nancy Yi Fan's book is any indication, twelve-year-old kids can produce a satisfying story that is completely worthwhile. 

UPDATE: Oscar just read this book and is now obsessed with it, as predicted :). He's been researching Nancy Yi Fan, asking if we can interview her, drawing pictures of all the birds in the book, and even writing his own bird stories. So SWORDBIRD is now wholeheartedly recommended by both Oscar and me! 
4 Comments
Sue link
9/29/2016 11:32:28 am

Who publishes this book? Is it self? Interesting that for all the criticism thrown at it (by others) this is on the NY bestseller list. If the writing is choppy, and I believe you know how to assess this), how in the world did it get on this list?

Well, I love the cover. I might have to pick this one up and check it out -- which is how it got on the bestseller list. a 12-year-old gets a five-book contract and a hefty advance. Well, if that happens, those quick to criticize will need to figure out why they review books.

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Olivia from Kid Book Reviewer
9/29/2016 05:26:13 pm

Nancy Yi Fan finished her first draft of this book and emailed it to the president of HarperCollins. HarperCollins loved it and decided to begin editting it to publish. It probably, as you said, got on the bestseller list since so many (like me) were interested to see how a 12 year old could write. Yi Fan was also born in China and then moved to the US, so English was her second language, which made this feat much more impressive.

And like I mentioned, some of the negative reviews were most likely due to bias or jealousy (some of them are pretty ridiculous), or just because they are, in fact, adults reviewing a children's book. Others are probably just opinion. It's hard to tell, though, just how honest and unbiased reviewers are, whether it's intentional or not.

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Sue link
10/2/2016 02:19:42 pm

Hey, kiddo, I review kids books and I'm an adult (by age anyway) :).

It takes guts to send a first draft to anyone, especially to the president of HC. No one but the author should see a first draft. Wow, she must really be impressive. Great, now I have one more book to read and review. I must read it.

Has HarperColllins released this? I know this is probably a silly question, but I'm confused on the publishing thing. And how did she get the address for the president? I'm stunned. Debuts are not suppose to go through this kind of process. Usually you write and edit and write and repeat several times, find a book agent, and they submit your book, it gets rejected and then accepted unless you are really good and then there is a bidding war and the author (hopefully) makes out good. You're not suppose to bypass all of that. Wow.

Olivia from Kid Book Reviewer
10/2/2016 03:22:17 pm

Yes, HarperCollins released it - a few years ago, actually. I'm not sure how she got the address (could have been via email) but I completely agree! It is extremely impressive that she was able to bypass that whole process - at age 12!

And haha, yes, I know, but often times adults don't enjoy the same books kids do because it wasn't intended for their age group. Obviously, there are exceptions (my mom loves all the same kids books I do), but as an overall generalization, it can be expected.


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